CJspellsfish's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Faye Valentine Pixel Art]

@HPCS why you five star?
criticism: needs less colours and the proportions is off

edit: ayo can you see my edits?
POGGERS

anyway, I mean- oh dangit I cant see the replies while editing
-the head feels slanted clockwise, and a pixel or two to the left of where the neck implies. also, what I meant by the colours was mostly the shades, and I wasnt looking hard enough; because it was actually the dithering I didn't like.
also, I don't like the black outlines on the face. I always avoid black outlines myself.

cordleia responds:

hello! may you please elaborate on what you believe is wrong with the proportions? her head is meant to be angled to the right if that wasn't clear. all of the colors are pulled from her official color scheme (she isn't my original character, she's from an anime) so i'm not sure i could fix that one, and the rest is shading; just let me know please! i would appreciate it so i can improve in the future :)


edit: thanks for the feedback.
by black outlines on her face, do you just mean her nose? the only other black outlining is her eyelashes which are supposed to be black. @CJspellsfish

[Six fanarts/Ching Cheng Hanji Tom]

is this still going? can you do big chungus next lol

TONTOROTONTORO responds:

Oh, yeah it's currently on hiatus, but all characters are set

[My Bike Slide part]

is that jet from your oc complation

UltraBirbZ responds:

Yes! :D

[[ARTFIGHT] MOSQUITO!]

inspiring design, is this original?

edit: I cant find that mosquito anywhere else tho

ToastieTV responds:

It's fanart for @EvilSk8r of their character Mosquito

[The Updog]

I ate too much Multi-Grain Cheerios with Strawberries and now I feel sick\
WHY ARE YOU LAUGHING, I'M SERIOUS

UnevenPrankster responds:

LMAO THEY EAT CHEERIOS

[Unstoppable Mr Yolk]

Why they got the Playstation 3 Move Motion Controller in the background?

UnevenPrankster responds:

Cause he on THE MOVE

[Mobile Suit, Burrito Dispenser]

dang this got the cute-girl tag? I didnt know the burrito truck was a gril :flushed:

Buster98 responds:

the mech is now blushing

[Tomario]

*towar
B)

Potatoman responds:

Womar

[Battlestation gif~]

why that guy just holding a disk like what is the disk does it contain a pirated copy of shrek

BellvonArtsy responds:

It contains what you desire most ;''D